2014年英語(yǔ)一小作文

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Directions：Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

You should include the details you think necessary.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

首先，各位同學(xué)需要根據(jù)之前講過(guò)的方法，審出四點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵信息。①應(yīng)用文的類型(題干中的關(guān)鍵字“letter”就告訴了各位考生應(yīng)用文的類型是書(shū)信);②書(shū)信的類型(大綱中規(guī)定的書(shū)信類型總共12種，但是根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞“suggesting”就可以判斷此篇為建議信); ③稱呼語(yǔ)(這封信是寫(xiě)給“the president of your university”，“president”是對(duì)方的一種職位，所以稱呼語(yǔ)為“Dear President” ;④寫(xiě)作背景(……how to improve students’ physical condition，如何提高學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì))。因此，我們可以根據(jù)這四點(diǎn)關(guān)鍵信息來(lái)組織我們這篇文章：

Dear President,

I am the chairman of the Students Union and always keep a watchful eye on our students’ physical condition. Generally speaking, the activities and courses that you provide to help strengthen the students’ health are pretty good. While, there are some better suggestions for you to further improve our physical condition.

First of all, I would be very grateful if you could introduce more sports facilities for our students exercising, because exercising is the most effective way to keep healthy and energetic. What’s more, the food that the refectory prepares for us is of great importance to our physical condition. So it is advisable for the refectory to buy fresher vegetables.

It would be greatly appreciated if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

現(xiàn)在，我們總結(jié)一下這篇文章的思路及其語(yǔ)言。其思路如下：第一段，自我介紹，表明相關(guān)，表?yè)P(yáng)在先，提出建議;第二段，具體建議，附加原因(建議和原因都可以從自己的日常生活的角度思考);第三段，表明期待。

在語(yǔ)言上，各位考生可以借鑒的如下：自我介紹的句型“ I am ……”表明相關(guān)的句型可以用“and”并列結(jié)構(gòu)“and always keep a watchful eye on ……”;表達(dá)表?yè)P(yáng)的句型“Generally speaking， …… are/is pretty good”;表明建議的句型可以使用“First of all, I would be very grateful if you could ……”或者“So it is advisable for sb to ……”表明期待的句型“It would be very appreciated if you could take my …… into consideration.”;

在接下來(lái)的時(shí)間里，各位同學(xué)要注意細(xì)節(jié)，比如，書(shū)寫(xiě)的字跡，書(shū)信的格式，書(shū)信的稱呼以及文章組織的邏輯性等。其次，各位同學(xué)也要多總結(jié)一下小作文的思路以及應(yīng)試的關(guān)鍵句型。希望各位考生可以發(fā)揮出最高水平。

預(yù)祝各位考生復(fù)習(xí)順利，考研成功!

(本文作者為輔導(dǎo)名師——陳文倩)